Tweaked the wording a bit.

diff --git a/Simulator/README.Win32 b/Simulator/README.Win32
index cba6cc9b613fd28d13d704ffb9ad7c01b0e1f87f..9578d86b4f1cba7b66d8fb39dba4ccc5bcc927b0 100644 (file)
--- a/Simulator/README.Win32
+++ b/Simulator/README.Win32
@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
 July 21, 1997
 =============
 
-Here is a quick outline of one way you can build FG for Win32 using a
-completely free development environment.
+Here is a quick outline of *one* way you can build FG for Win32 using
+a completely free development environment.
 
-1.  Setup your development environment.  The main Cygnus Gnu-Win32
-    page is at: 
+1.  Install and configure the Cygnus Gnu-Win32  development
+    environment.  The main Cygnus Gnu-Win32 page is at: 
 
         http://www.cygnus.com/misc/gnu-win32/
 
-    Download and install the Cygnus Gnu-Win32 compiler:
+    You can download the Cygnus Gnu-Win32 compiler from:
 
         ftp://ftp.cygnus.com/pub/gnu-win32/latest/cdk.exe
 
-    Be sure to read this package's README for post installation
-    configuration instructions:
+    To install, just run the file: "cdk.exe".  Be sure to read this
+    package's README for post installation configuration instructions:
 
         http://www.cygnus.com/misc/gnu-win32/readme_toc.html
 
@@ -33,14 +33,15 @@ completely free development environment.
     Be sure to use the -d option.  This will create all the needed
     subdirectories.  Otherwise you will have one big mess!
 
-    You should now have directory called ``FlightGear'' with several
+    This should create a directory called ``FlightGear'' with several
     subdirectories.
 
 
-3.  Install the OpenGL/GLUT headers.  Cd to ``FlightGear\Src\Win32''.
-    There you will find a file called gl-hdrs.zip.  Assuming you
-    installed the free Cygnus compiler in C:\gnuwin32\b18,, copy the
-    file ``gl-hdrs.zip'' to ``c:\gnuwin32\b18\include\":
+3.  Install the OpenGL/GLUT headers.  Cd to the newly created
+    directory:  ``FlightGear\Src\Win32''.  There you will find a file
+    called gl-hdrs.zip.  Assuming you installed the free Cygnus
+    compiler in C:\gnuwin32\b18,, copy the file ``gl-hdrs.zip'' to
+    ``c:\gnuwin32\b18\include\":  
 
         copy gl-hdrs.zip c:\gnuwin32\b18\include\
 
@@ -48,7 +49,8 @@ completely free development environment.
 
         pkunzip -d gl-hdrs.zip
 
-    You can remove the gl-hdrs.zip file if you wish.
+    Remember the -d option!  You can remove the gl-hdrs.zip file if
+    you wish. 
 
 
 4.  Install the OpenGL dynamic link libraries.  If you are running
@@ -62,8 +64,8 @@ completely free development environment.
     extract the files.  To install these permanently on your system,
     you can copy them to your ``c:\windows\system\" directory.
     Otherwise, you could just as easily copy them to the
-    ``FlightGear\Src\OpenGL'' directory or someplace that is in your
-    path.
+    ``FlightGear\Src\OpenGL'' directory or else someplace that is in
+    your path.
 
 4.  Edit the ``make.inc'' file.  Go back to the main FlightGear source
     directory.  From where ever you extracted the FG code, cd to
@@ -73,7 +75,7 @@ completely free development environment.
 
     Uncomment all the makefile defines in the ``Cygnus Win32''
     section.  Also, you should comment out any of the defines in the
-    other sections.
+    other platform dependent sections.
 
 
 5.  Build the executable.  From the same ``FlightGear\Src'' directory,
@@ -88,8 +90,8 @@ completely free development environment.
     these are serious.  
 
 
-6.  Try it out!  cd to the FlightGear\Src\OpenGL directory and run the
-    simulator:
+6.  Try it out!  When make is done, cd to the FlightGear\Src\OpenGL
+    directory and run the simulator:
 
         fg0