Blackout: improve wording

diff --git a/blackout/blackout.php b/blackout/blackout.php
index 83b2dbc1a10f6e2a629b566a4474840a94391420..aa08cef7f35b01c7ae3d69ec61ba1a6112c01ddb 100644 (file)
--- a/blackout/blackout.php
+++ b/blackout/blackout.php
@@ -94,17 +94,17 @@ function blackout_addon_admin(&$a, &$o) {
        // a note for the admin
        $adminnote = "";
        if ($date2 < $date1) {
-               $adminnote = DI::l10n()->t("The end-date is prior to the start-date of the blackout, you should fix this");
+               $adminnote = DI::l10n()->t("The end-date is prior to the start-date of the blackout, you should fix this.");
        } else {
-               $adminnote = DI::l10n()->t("Please double check that the current settings for the blackout. Begin will be <strong>%s</strong> and it will end <strong>%s</strong>.", $mystart, $myend);
+               $adminnote = DI::l10n()->t("Please double check the current settings for the blackout. Begin will be <strong>%s</strong> and it will end <strong>%s</strong>.", $mystart, $myend);
        }
        $o = Renderer::replaceMacros($t, [
                '$submit' => DI::l10n()->t('Save Settings'),
-               '$rurl' => ["rurl", DI::l10n()->t("Redirect URL"), $myurl, DI::l10n()->t("all your visitors from the web will be redirected to this URL"), "", "", "url"],
+               '$rurl' => ["rurl", DI::l10n()->t("Redirect URL"), $myurl, DI::l10n()->t("All your visitors from the web will be redirected to this URL."), "", "", "url"],
                '$startdate' => ["startdate", DI::l10n()->t("Begin of the Blackout"), $mystart, DI::l10n()->t("Format is <tt>YYYY-MM-DD hh:mm</tt>; <em>YYYY</em> year, <em>MM</em> month, <em>DD</em> day, <em>hh</em> hour and <em>mm</em> minute.")],
                '$enddate' => ["enddate", DI::l10n()->t("End of the Blackout"), $myend, ""],
                '$adminnote' => $adminnote,
-               '$aboutredirect' => DI::l10n()->t("<strong>Note</strong>: The redirect will be active from the moment you press the submit button. Users currently logged in will <strong>not</strong> be thrown out but can't login again after logging out should the blackout is still in place."),
+               '$aboutredirect' => DI::l10n()->t("<strong>Note</strong>: The redirect will be active from the moment you press the submit button. Users currently logged in will <strong>not</strong> be thrown out but can't login again after logging out while the blackout is still in place."),
        ]);
 }
 function blackout_addon_admin_post (&$a) {